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When did it all change,
And my heart faded away?
It’s kind of funny when you think,
But thinking too much brings you past the point.
Why didn’t I fight again?
I could have won in the end,
I always knew that.

Along the tracks I stopped caring,
Now we’re gone,
But the world is still spinning.
Maybe you’ll be spitting on my picture,
Or screwing,
It’s just the same.

I’m not worried anymore.

Words fail emotions,
But in my hands they’re tools.
Who’d have thought a sentence could kill?
I could be a killer,
But crimes of passion aren’t much fun.
It’s so cleashe’ for an L.A. homicide anyway.
Give a final wave,
As that last human emotion goes:
Away.
©2004-2009 ~destroyeralmighty
:icondestroyeralmighty:

Author's Comments

I started to put this in scraps... but I decided that the majority of the poems I've written in relation to a certian someone had become quite the series, and well it wouldn't be very nice of me to leave the series open ended. This is probably the last poem of that series... Now I need a new muse, don't expect much from me for a while.

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:iconomessyone:
wow...people should pay to read it

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One thing is for sure, you'll never make it out of life alive.
:icondestroyeralmighty:
I wouldn't complain. Thanks

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I may have told a lie;
but never lived a lie;
and never took a life...
I could have saved.
:iconlady-lilly:
How emotional. This is beautifully written, and simply wonder to read due to it's detailed yet short and simple manner. Like most of your works, this is simply stuffed with deep emotions and wonderful wordings. I always adore how you write in such a fluid and interesting manner. I should have you write a poem about me or something. Bravo!
:icondestroyeralmighty:
As always, thank you for your comment. You make me want to write more just to get comments :P

I may actually write a poem about you... I have an idea about what I'd write about. But if I do that, you should give Serge a nice drawing out!

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I may have told a lie;
but never lived a lie;
and never took a life...
I could have saved.
:iconablackcrayon:
finally over her? Yes? Good :D You deserve much better, and this poem is very good. :) I enjoyed it
:icondestroyeralmighty:
I'm as over her as I'll ever be. Might as well accept that and move on with my life. Still doubt I'll find better, but at this point in my life, I'm not going to bother looking.

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I may have told a lie;
but never lived a lie;
and never took a life...
I could have saved.
:iconsarahbean:
I love that last line
As that last human emotion goes:
Away.
If only reagular emotions would do that :) .

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Shh. I'm having a rhetorical conversation.

It's not how many breaths you take in a moment, it's how many moments take your breath away.
:icondestroyeralmighty:
Thank you, that's also my faviort part of the poem, I feel like it ties the entire thing together.

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I may have told a lie;
but never lived a lie;
and never took a life...
I could have saved.
:iconablackcrayon:
Well, You will find better just wait. :)

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